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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Write in the HISTORICAL genre (05/03/07)

TITLE: William Wallace
By Benjamin Graber
05/03/07


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William Wallace was a Scottish warrior who fought for the independence of Scotland. He never saw his dream come true, but Scotland won its freedom just 23 years after his death.


William Wallace

What wailing bagpipes seemed to say
Was true; you’d never win this war,
The miracles you’d seen produced,
You knew that they’d occurred before—

But still you fought for freedom’s cause,
You spilled your blood—it seemed in vain;
You scoffed at every gift held out
You saw behind them captives’ chains—

When they had dragged you through the streets,
Then made you ready to be hanged,
Did you give up the fight that day?
Or was it battle hymns you sang?

Did you see through the fog of hate?
Or were you deafened by the din?
When faced with death, did you see life,
And know that freedom soon must win?

For what the bagpipes told your soul
Came true; it all was meant to be—
For not long after you had died
St. Andrew’s cross was flying free.


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Esther Gellert05/10/07
The blood of the Scottish kings flowing in my veins cheered loudly at the end of this.
I'm sure I actually heard the bagpipes playing as I read. How'd you do that?
Jacquelyn Horne05/11/07
Very well-written, informative poem.
Kate Grey05/12/07
Bravo.
Valerie Routhieaux05/13/07
Very well written, and I have to agree, I heard the bagpipes too as I read.
David Butler 05/13/07
Aye! Theer's a wee bit o' Highland blude in my veins that was stirred at this! Well done! "....they canna take away our FREEDOOOOOOOOM!"
Marilyn Schnepp 05/13/07
My great, great, great (about 7 greats) grandfather was in that war...and became a prisoner who was later shipped to the New Country (America)...so I enjoyed reading the poem of those olden days. Nicely done.
LaNaye Perkins05/14/07
Well Done! A great tribute to William Wallace. I don't have Scottish blood in my ancestry.... but, I swear I heard those bagpipes too!
Joanne Sher 05/14/07
This flowed wonderfully and was so interesting and heartfelt. Enjoyed this very much.
Jan Ackerson 05/14/07
Wonderful poem--it's got it all. Meter, rhyme, stirring imagery--a total package.
Ruth Scott05/16/07
Awesome! Scottish blood is in me too, and the story of William Wallace is one I like very much.
Thanks for letting the bagpipes play their freedom chant!
I'm going to send this poem to my older brother too(He's a bagpipe playing Cowboy)! :o)
Betty Castleberry05/16/07
Mel Gibson would be proud. ;0)
It was entertaining, and told the entire story in a short piece. Well done.
Brenda Welc05/16/07
I too have Scottish blood. After finding my birth mother she said we were in line for royality but someone got us dethroned. One day I'll have to do some research. Wonderfully written poem, keep up the great writing.
Sara Harricharan 05/17/07
I like this! It's short, easy to read and really packs a punch. Good job and congrats!
Brianna Carmichael05/21/07
Hey Ben! Greatly enjoyed that. Kind of funny, because we discovered just a few months ago that we're descendants of William Wallace. (someone on Mom's side of the family traced our roots back quite a ways) Anyhow, great work, as always!
~Brianna
Joy Faire Stewart05/22/07
Loved your poem...it told a story, was easy to understand & was food for thought! Congratulation on you win.
Janice Cartwright12/24/07
Doing a bit of browsing today. Your poem is finely crafted. I love the 'aura' it creates.


   
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