The Official Writing Challenge
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And He makes my joy complete. Thanks for helping me remember where I lose my joy. Simple truth told poetically. Thanks for sharing.
05/07/07
I really liked the repetition in the first several lines--very poetic.

Quick edit: I began to weep.

I hope you were able to reclaim your joy!
05/07/07
Very interesting, poetic piece! It reminds me to hold on to my joy, to cherish it, to share it! :)
I like this. I think it is repetitive in a good way, which is rare... Keep up the good work!