The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/07
Beautifully written. This really touched me, and I'm sure it will touch many others. Thank you for sharing.
05/06/07
What a lovely, transparent article! Thank you so much for this touching testimony.

FYI: Use "bore" as a past tense of "bear."

Good writing, and I'm happy that I read this tonight.
What a testimony of God's faithfulness! I could almost feel your agony myself. Another verb to change: lied to lay. Otherwise, you connected with your reader well.
05/09/07
Very strong emotionally, both in terms of the pain and confusion, and your trust in the love of Christ. Thank you for sharing.
Just stopped by to visit to see what you've been writing lately. This is really good Sue-Ellen and I hope to see more of your articles in the challenge each week. Hugs~ Janice C