The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/07
Good message in this piece! Romans 12:1 goes along with your thoughts, as it says: "...offer your bodies as living sacrifices, holy and pleasing to God--which is your spiritual act of worship." (NIV) Your article encourages us to have a much broader view of worship than just singing songs or giving praises. Thanks for sharing! :)
05/06/07
I like your consider--commit--change format at the end.

You had several instance of switching from past to present tense and back. Otherwise, good writing, and an apt lesson.