The Official Writing Challenge
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05/06/07
What a marvelous concept, and full of hope and promise.

Be careful of overuse of exclamation points, and in essays like this, you should spell out "and" instead of using the ampersand.

I like the way you included personal examples. Good job.
05/08/07
What a beautiful thought. I am not rejected, but rescued.
05/08/07
Thank You.

I needed this tonight.

I fall into the "crummy job" category.

The thing is that I KNOW that God knows what's best for me but I can't help but feel that I'm wasting what little time I have on this earth when I could be doing so much more.

Anyway, you have helped me see that I can bloom where I'm planted and be the "rescuer" for someone that I may not have otherwise reached if I had my way.

I wish you peace.

Be easy.

Pauly