The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/07
Great pace in this dialog-driven piece.

Wow, quite a whirlwind ride from old maid to bride in three days! :o)

Some readers complain when there isn't enough (or any) dialogue in a story. Amazingly, you have almost ALL dialogue. Great job!

One of my favorite movies is "Fiddler On The Roof," and this story reminded me some of that, so I automatically liked it for that reason, and as I read further I liked it for itself. I could hear the Jewish sing-song voice inflections in your characters' speech.

Kudos to you!
A different approach to romance. A very good article.