The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/07
WOW! You had my heart skiping a beat or two waiting to see how this would turn out! "I'd rather talk to my car." Terrific line -lol. Great story and great writing!
Good romance. Would have liked a little more story, a little rushed at the end. But very good writing and good story plot.
05/01/07
How wonderful it is when God takes over and gives us what we need, whether we know it or not! I had a bit of trouble keeping up with who was speaking and thinking what at time, a few POV issues. But it didn't detract from the overall story, and I just felt it coming, the fact that God had a single all lined up for this gal who "didn't want to date" any of these guys... Nice job. Blessings, Cheri
05/02/07
I could FEEL the struggle, the emotion, the awkwardness - the signs of a good writer. Well done.
I could feel your emotions for the beginning of your own love story. I, too, had a little difficulty with some of the POV's; however, overall it was a good story.
05/02/07
Loved this! So fast-paced and very vivid descriptions. I like the feel of you-are-there and the continuous stream of thoughts running through her head. The author's note was a clincher though. What a cute couple. ^_^
Enjoyed the frank way you were able to bring us into the MC's thoughts. True emotions are not always easy to write about as they can be convoluted at times. I liked the message, too, that we may have our plans, but God directs our steps...sometimes right into the arms of our intended spouses.
05/02/07
Yes I loved the way you wrote the inner thoughts and wondered if this sweet story was a testimony as well. Very romantic and realistic look at moving on after a shattered heart!