The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 527 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
04/28/07
Great atmosphere and tone, very true to the genre.

Maybe a bit too much story for the word limit? You might have started with the war injury, and then developed the characters a bit more.

I like the framework of the words carved into the tree.
Heartrendering story of the aftermath of war. But a happy ending is always good.