The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked your story a lot. I think you did a fantastic job!
Very cute. I especially liked the jig in the end.
04/29/07
Yes, a really nice last line!
Cute romance story. Class reunion and old flame. This made a good story.
04/30/07
This was very sweet and a great premise for a romantic story. I really enjoyed it.
05/02/07
That last line was the icing on the cake.
Ah, the old class reunion. How I can relate. This was an entertaining read. I adored the ending. I could picture this proper business man dancing a jig. Good work.
05/02/07
"...navigating the chirping and chattering impediments that kept him from his destiny." -- one of my favorite descriptions.

I really liked this a lot!

Blessings, Cheri
05/02/07
Very sweet.
05/02/07
I will echo the comments, of cute and sweet. This was fun to read. I especially liked how Angela could 'get to him' even after all those years. There were some great descriptions in there, like the butterflies exploding in his stomach, very creative and the last line of dancing a jig like a carefree schoolboy. I really enjoyed this. Great writing! ^_^
05/02/07
Very descriptive and realistic!
05/02/07
Very good. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. God bless.