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04/26/07
Beautifully written. Such vivid descriptions of both physical surroundings and emotions. (I'm having a hard time typing through tears.)
This is written so beautifully. I really liked it alot. Great job!
Good writing. I could feel his pain and sorrow.
04/30/07
Wonderful depiction of grief and healing. Good writing.
What a lovely story. Thank you for the reminder that we can stand on the promises of God and that in Christ we look forward to eternity with our loved ones.
05/02/07
“"It’s been over two years. You need to get on with life,' his psychiatrist said." The doc needs a refresher course - it can take three years they say to work through the loss of a spouse. The healing at the end might have been a little quick, perhaps you could have said that the healing began at last as he read those wonderful words. But in any case, this was well done, a lovely bitter-sweet story.
05/02/07
We need more stories that reveal how hope is always that light that gets us through. Great writing!
05/02/07
Great description - and, of course, I love the end.
05/02/07
That is real ROMANCE. Bittersweet and beautifully written. I love the catchphrase "Till the end of time" It fit and set the tone for this story. Well done. ^_^
05/02/07
Lump in throat, tears ready to fall...this was a beautiful story of love. Great job!