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Beautifully written. Such vivid descriptions of both physical surroundings and emotions. (I'm having a hard time typing through tears.)
This is written so beautifully. I really liked it alot. Great job!
Good writing. I could feel his pain and sorrow.
Wonderful depiction of grief and healing. Good writing.
What a lovely story. Thank you for the reminder that we can stand on the promises of God and that in Christ we look forward to eternity with our loved ones.
“"It’s been over two years. You need to get on with life,' his psychiatrist said." The doc needs a refresher course - it can take three years they say to work through the loss of a spouse. The healing at the end might have been a little quick, perhaps you could have said that the healing began at last as he read those wonderful words. But in any case, this was well done, a lovely bitter-sweet story.
We need more stories that reveal how hope is always that light that gets us through. Great writing!
Great description - and, of course, I love the end.
That is real ROMANCE. Bittersweet and beautifully written. I love the catchphrase "Till the end of time" It fit and set the tone for this story. Well done. ^_^
Lump in throat, tears ready to fall...this was a beautiful story of love. Great job!