The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/05
Wow. That was such a sweet poem and a nice tie-in to the ending.
Very, very nice. Love the image of the light being left on. Beautiful.
01/28/05
In our household, it is a bit of a joke (but serious) that if I come home and find the garage door up and the light on, I feel loved. So your poem, while beautiful in its own right, is also very effective because it strikes a cord - I identify! Thanks.
A hearty AMEN to what you said. God bless you.
Susanne, I just found this poem, and I love it so much! What a thought! Your represent Jesus, well!