The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/07
This is really sweet. Nice diaglogue flow.

So, do they stay together through college, or what? I need to know the end :)
Very romantic. It's always good when stories include God's will. It sets a good message.
05/01/07
This is so sweet! And I love the verse Psalm 138:8. I also like how you included that he'd talked with her parents and planned the evening, right down to the kleenex for the tears... Beautiful job. Hope this ends up in the winner's circle. Blessings, Cheri
05/02/07
Kyle's a winner! I hope Blair hangs on to him. There's enough conflict to keep this from being too "goody-goody," but a solid Christian message. Good work.
I especially liked Kyle's prayer. What good characters hyou created!
05/02/07
Great writing, a message woven through a charming story! Fantastic!!
05/02/07
Just beautiful - great build-up of conflict and such a lovely ending.
05/02/07
Kyle is definitely a keeper, I hope Blair doesn't let him go. That was so romantic and the dialouge between them was cute. Especially the line with showing up for prom with raccoon eyes. ^_^
05/02/07
Great dialogue and yes Kyle is a dream. What a great job you did creating him!
05/03/07
Congratulations on your well-deserved EC win! This is so lovely. It brought tears to my eyes. Excellent!
05/03/07
Yes - a VERY well deserved winn girl - way-to-go! Love Pat (aka hebrws416)
05/03/07
***CONGRATS!***
I particularly liked the message of this finely written article. It is encouraging that some of today's youth still believe and hope in the promises of God. Great writing and congratulations on your EC placement.
05/03/07
This is a lovely, romantic story! CONGRATULATIONS on your EC win!!!!!!!!!! :)
05/03/07
Congratulations on your EC placement, Jess! Super job! Blessings, Cheri
I love the maturity demonstrated by your prom couple. This would be an inspiring story for teens. Congratulations on your EC placement.