The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/07
What a great metaphor. This is well done. The formatting is a little cumbersome and a few sentences could use a tad bit of work, but overall I really enjoyed it. What a hope to know our Savior will come for us one day and we will be like him. (I hope I am reading into this correctly =) )