The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm glad the mother quickly realized the need to teach her son responsibility. I saw a few spelling errors and I would separate your dialogue. Either with a line space or indentation. Keep writing.
Children learn responsibility quickly when their money source runs out. Good job here.
A little separation between paragraphs and dialogue, etc. would be helpful for the reader. Cute story, but more Exasperating than humorous for the most part - but creative, well written and has a great morale. Keep working at it! God Bless.
PS: sorry, "Moral"...not morale.