The Official Writing Challenge
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04/21/07
Well, normally I'd complain about a piece that ended in the middle of the story, but you finished so creatively that I had to laugh. Certainly innovative!
You did run out of word count, but maybe you could have combined some things in the beginning so you would have more room to tell more at the end. Anyway, It was good while it lasted.