The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story on the thoughts children have. Well related to parables in the Bible. I liked the end line. Good job.
04/23/07
Good one! Kids take these things literally and so should we! Good lesson here and well told.
04/24/07
This initially started like a sort of documentary, but I felt rewarded by the very funny ending. I'm glad I read it all. I'm encouraged to think more deeply over scriptures. Ooh I can just see those children trying to yank out the shelf...I'm still chuckling.