The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a delightful read and thanks for the reminder that God cares about all areas of our lives.
This sounds like a true story with a little embellishment. If not, it sure should be. Just a little too quick on the finish, but really very good.
04/23/07
I'm glad you didn't make your ending "neat" (as in, she really did fall into his arms and they lived happily ever after). He loved her in spite of all the blood running down her chin — now that's real love. Nice work.