The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/07
I loved this story!! Don't know which one of the three pastors' most embarrassing moments was the most hilarious. Think I laughed the hardest on the last one, though!

Saw a number of typos and/or spelling errors in this: "though" should be "thought" (paragraph 4),"barrowed" "borrowed" and "access" "excess" (p. 10),"in" "it" (p.11), and "there" "their" (near the bottom). Also the question in next to last paragraph needs a question mark.

I loved the title of this story and also the way the account begins and ends with the statement "It's funny because it's supposed to be serious." So true--I can relate! Good symmetry in the opening and closing of these delightful anecdotes. Great job!
04/19/07
I loved this story!! Don't know which one of the three pastors' most embarrassing moments was the most hilarious. Think I laughed the hardest on the last one, though!

Saw a number of typos and/or spelling errors in this: "though" should be "thought" (paragraph 4),"barrowed" "borrowed" and "access" "excess" (p. 10),"in" "it" (p.11), and "there" "their" (near the bottom). Also the question in next to last paragraph needs a question mark.

I loved the title of this story and also the way the account begins and ends with the statement "It's funny because it's supposed to be serious." So true--I can relate! Good symmetry in the opening and closing of these delightful anecdotes. Great job!
Great collection of stories. I, too, noticed the spelling as noted by another commenter. Absolutely perfect title. This piece definitely made me laugh.
Funny excerpts from the pulpit. Good job.