The Official Writing Challenge
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04/19/07
I loved this story!! Don't know which one of the three pastors' most embarrassing moments was the most hilarious. Think I laughed the hardest on the last one, though!

Saw a number of typos and/or spelling errors in this: "though" should be "thought" (paragraph 4),"barrowed" "borrowed" and "access" "excess" (p. 10),"in" "it" (p.11), and "there" "their" (near the bottom). Also the question in next to last paragraph needs a question mark.

I loved the title of this story and also the way the account begins and ends with the statement "It's funny because it's supposed to be serious." So true--I can relate! Good symmetry in the opening and closing of these delightful anecdotes. Great job!
04/19/07
I loved this story!! Don't know which one of the three pastors' most embarrassing moments was the most hilarious. Think I laughed the hardest on the last one, though!

Saw a number of typos and/or spelling errors in this: "though" should be "thought" (paragraph 4),"barrowed" "borrowed" and "access" "excess" (p. 10),"in" "it" (p.11), and "there" "their" (near the bottom). Also the question in next to last paragraph needs a question mark.

I loved the title of this story and also the way the account begins and ends with the statement "It's funny because it's supposed to be serious." So true--I can relate! Good symmetry in the opening and closing of these delightful anecdotes. Great job!
04/19/07
Great collection of stories. I, too, noticed the spelling as noted by another commenter. Absolutely perfect title. This piece definitely made me laugh.
04/22/07
Funny excerpts from the pulpit. Good job.