The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/07
Beautifully written story! Effectively intense--the main character's pain comes through clearly.

Sentences could be a little shorter and more dialogue added.

Great, thought-provoking quote near the end about the woman being smarter than her husband assumed. This really brought both characters to life as interesting individuals!
I though I was reading a page out of my own life! I, too, did those things when my "minister" ex-husband had affairs, etc. and that I was to studpid to know. Bless your heart.

Your writing was wonderful and very vivid.
Beautiful article. Very well written, interesting thought for a mystery.
04/16/07
How inspiring that the woman stood up for herself. Good job!
Loved this ladies attitude...good for her!