The Official Writing Challenge
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04/14/07
Such amazingly vivid description. You paint a portrait masterfully with your words. I was RIGHT THERE.
04/21/07
Wow! That was intense. Good description.

You might want to add a space between your paragraphs to help your reader transition easier.

Good topic for mystery. God's ways are surely above ours! Blessings, Cheri
Very vivid account of this Bible story. Well done.