The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/07
What a clever, original way of communicating the Gospel message!

Have not read any Holmes mysteries, but can imagine their style being very much like the style used in this narrative. The characters seemed real and I could feel the smoky atmosphere.

Great descriptive title--it grabbed me right away!
This is incredibly creative, and yes, you captured a typical scene between Holmes and Watson down to the "Elementary, my dear Watson." Great Job!!
04/12/07
Yes, very creative, and quite good Watson and Holmes. I enjoyed the message.
Fun. Creative. A neat twist on this topic. Enjoyable
The dilect between the two is very believable...Nicely done. The Gospel is very Elementry....Great job!