The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/07
You have a very good message here! Who we really are inside is often a mystery to us as teens and young adults!

A couple writing suggestions I'd like to make are for you to space a bit between sections in your piece for easier reading and to proofread your story carefully, so nothing distracts from what you have to say.


Keep writing and sharing your thoughts and ideas! :)
Liked what this said, but not sure how it fits the genre. There is truth here all girls should know.
What a truthful account of how we look at ourselves, and how we should look at ourselves. Good job.