The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 683 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
04/12/07
This one really got to me. I thought they might have made a mistake in the diagnosis. Whew.

God bless
04/12/07
It was certainly a surprise ending. I'm not sure I understood what happened at the end. I suspect that you needed a longer story to meet all of its potential. It was a great story but I think you can improve it by including more detail as set up.
04/13/07
Nice. But what happened? Couldn't he have fallen off a cliff on his own? This could definitely be more. Enjoyed it!
04/13/07
oh, how sad! Good writing skills here.
04/17/07
Difficult circumstances and story that you told well, in Jesus' Name,

Patricia