The Official Writing Challenge
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03/16/07
Did you ever learn to play the piano? I’m still not sure. If not, I hope you will. The paragraph describing how the animals enjoyed hearing you sing was really cute. I also liked this: “…music lifts my heart and revives my spirit. It plants me back on safe ground.” Nice message, too.
Enjoyed living through your desire to learn the piano. It's a shame that children's desires art often put on the back burner, but glad you were able to sing to the Lord.
03/20/07
From your story it is very obvious that God has given you a special love for music, and I'm glad you found an outlet for it in singing. I like the part with you and the "animal chorus" in the barnyard, and I thought your last paragraph was a very effective way to end your piece. Thank you for sharing! :)