The Official Writing Challenge
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03/16/07
From difficult beginnings to becoming “A Vessel of Music.” I liked the title. It fit the piece well. I also thought the following two sentences were very powerful: “The silence was full of the presence of the Holy Spirit, and no one dared move or speak. In complete surrender, he lifted his hands high with the violin in one and the bow in the other.” One suggestion might be to consider breaking down a couple of the larger paragraphs into smaller ones.
03/17/07
A wonderful testimony.
Wonderful story of the power of emotional healing - both his and that of his audience. Good writing.