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03/10/07
Excellent job with the POV in this sad story!
03/11/07
Very well written. I like the boy's attention wondering at the beginning. It made him seem more realistic. Great job.
Very sad. It's revealing to look through the eyes and heart of an innocent child. Good story.
03/12/07
Excellent story. Excellent writing! Very emotional and I loved the character's POV. This is very good! Keep up the great writing!
03/12/07
Sad but sweet story! It's well-written, and I liked seeing things from the perspective of the little boy. Good job!
03/12/07
Very moving. Your choice of using a child's perspective was excellent. Great job.