The Official Writing Challenge
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03/09/07
Very, very good!
03/10/07
I enjoyed this. I loved the part about being pulled apart and then put back together. Good images. Nice take on the subject. Good job!
Very creative. The idea of a dream store is fun, and your character picked the perfect dream. Good job!
03/11/07
Interesting idea--a dream store! Nice story!
03/13/07
Very creative & very well done!
03/15/07
Woo-hoo! Go Holly! This is an awesome story. Definetly deserves to be in the Editor's choice. I love the reciept! Only on minor mistake, "WRapped" instead of "Rapped." Other than that, perfect!
03/15/07
Awesome - wonderful storytelling. I agree - absolutely deserving of editor's choice. Congratulations!
03/15/07
CONGRATULATIONS! Our entries were somewhat similar this week. Great minds, you know! :D
Sorry I missed this earlier, but the judges didn't and they were right on. Congratulations!
Excellent! I really liked how this dream was in the priceless section of the store, yet was already paid in full. Congratulations on your placing!
03/15/07
Holly, congrats on your EC. I hope there are more to come for you. Excellent job. God bless.