The Official Writing Challenge
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03/09/07
Is this a true story? Very cute!
Cute romance story. It's not often that, when we pass up a bargain, the bargain finds us. But, I'm so glad that yours found you. Good writing.
03/12/07
What a delightful story! Its ending caught me by surprise and was thoroughly satisfying.

I liked the creative imagery used--my favorite line was that describing the narrator's future husband as "packaged" in Ohio but "shipped" to... Cute!

The catchy title also sparked my curiosity. Great job!
03/15/07
Very nice, Connie.
And congrats on making the Top 40!