The Official Writing Challenge
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Is this a true story? Very cute!
Cute romance story. It's not often that, when we pass up a bargain, the bargain finds us. But, I'm so glad that yours found you. Good writing.
What a delightful story! Its ending caught me by surprise and was thoroughly satisfying.

I liked the creative imagery used--my favorite line was that describing the narrator's future husband as "packaged" in Ohio but "shipped" to... Cute!

The catchy title also sparked my curiosity. Great job!
Very nice, Connie.
And congrats on making the Top 40!