The Official Writing Challenge
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03/09/07
Ooooh, ouch! What a wonderfully written satire! I'm a huge fan of irony, and you really nailed it.
The writing was good, but I would have liked a happier more life-productive ending. I get the pov very well, but would like to have seen a solution. This is very good, however. Keep it up.