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I very much enjoyed reading this reflection on your "grooms," as I'm in the midst of wedding plans (for my daughter), too!

A few things: watch switches in tense, and in your first sentence, it sounds as if your eyes are opening the front door.

If this is a true story--congratulations!

Good story. Shopping with Jesus is the best way to go. His funds are unlimited, but his wisdom always prevails. He also cares about our desires.
This was great! It's a wonderful reminder to young women to remember thier 'other groom' too. I liked the ending when she found the perfect gown. You did a great job with the descriptions, especially in the beginning, with her 'entourage'. ^_^
Very descriptive writing with an excellent message!