The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/07
Very sweet! I like the bit at the end about the love deposits.
Yes, really a rich woman. Fortunately, I can say the same. My husband has shown me tremendous love over the years. Good story.
03/12/07
I enjoyed this story! I liked the name "Wiggles" for the fish and could see his plump body lying in the puddle of water--great description! Good dialogue and message, too!
03/15/07
Very nice - sweet and great details. Congrats on making the editor's choice!
Really enjoyed the way you lead into a really great truth. Congratulations on your win.
03/15/07
Congrats on your EC placement. Excellent work. God bless.