The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/07
Inventive POV for this familiar Bible story--I liked it! Work a bit on more casual dialog, perhaps. This touched me on a personal level, as someone dear to me has a similar affliction, and I've often speculated about how we'd react to seeing her healed.
Nice. Fun! I enjoyed the words lavish and exquisite I could picture the fabric.
03/09/07
I definitely didn't see this coming! I loved the recognition coming over me as I saw what this was about. The scene in the market was definitely the strongest part of this. Keep writing!
Interesting take on a familiar Bible story. I liked the attitude of Daniel's wife.