The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/07
Kleenex...someone pass the kleenex. This is so full of tenderness. Even though we know God only has to speak it, I loved your imagination in this piece. Beautiful! The closing left me breathless.
03/03/07
Cool! I really enjoyed this. You kept me guessing right until the end. This was well written and a very good read. Nice work!
03/04/07
Lovely picture. I enjoyed this very much.
03/04/07
Tender story. Shows God's love for Adam. Loved the part where you brought in the fact that he loved Adam so much that he would die for him.
03/05/07
Fun idea. You had me to the end. Well done!
03/07/07
Great description. I cringed when I read,
"At first the needle met a soft resistance, but then the skin gave way allowing the needle to pass through."

I liked the twist at the end. I didn't know you were talking about God. Nice job.
03/08/07
An awesome piece of work! So glad the "other" Judges agreed.
03/08/07
Congratulations. I am not surprised!
03/08/07
Joe,

This is a masterpiece. I love surprises, and this was the best.

In Jesus' Name,

Patricia
03/14/07
Wow, what a thriller -- you had me guessing until the end.

I had a feeling it might be about God when you mentioned the incisdion in His side.
Keep writing, and God Bless,