The Official Writing Challenge
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This was excellent! The analogies were good and formed a clear message.
I really liked this. I think the beginning stanzas were especially strong; loved the contrasting personalities. Good work
Very unique approach to this topic. I liked it!
A very creative way to use the topic. I loved seeing the couple's thread of life. Great job!
Love this! I tried unsuccessfully to go this route with my entry, but bailed. This was what I wanted to say! Great job at weaving it so well!