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A great re-telling of a Biblical event. Your wording, setting and dialogue had me right there. Esp. liked the "star speckled sky."
03/02/07
A good retelling of this story, and a very realistic progression in her prayers. Nice job
Tears, moving very moving. Well done! Great retelling. Keep it up! I could see a book on retelling the stories of the bible!
Well done! I love this story in the Bible but you, through your writing, have elevated its relevancy and application for me.
Just as Tabitha blessed those she sewed for, you have blessed me with this recounting.
I loved it all, from the narrative to your character's comments...
I love the three approaches in prayer with God! How well you verbalized some of my very own stategies!
I am printing this out and placing it in my Bible for future reference.
Again, well done.