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03/01/07
I enjoyed this. I liked how you told what the doctors said and then took your confidence from the stock of the family itself. Good job!
Very touching story. The title caught my attention because you don't hear of people darning socks anymore. And isn't that exactly what you stated! I melted right into your story with good memories of my own.
03/02/07
Very sweet story, and I liked the ending a lot! There were a few punctuation errors, though, and in your opening paragraph, it would have been easier to read if you had separated the words of the two speakers. I did enjoy the theme of life beginning and life ending, and I was very impressed with Grandma Dorothy's character! Good job! :)
03/02/07
Nice job & great ending!
I really enjoyed this heartwarming story. I would have liked to see a few of Grandma Dorothy's sayings quoted. Good job.
A very sweet story and tribute to your grandmother. I loved the ending. Great job.
Connie,

I love that your daughter was born with fiery red hair, as predicted by Grandma Norris.

In Jesus' Name,

Patricia