The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/07
I enjoyed this. I liked how you told what the doctors said and then took your confidence from the stock of the family itself. Good job!
03/02/07
Very touching story. The title caught my attention because you don't hear of people darning socks anymore. And isn't that exactly what you stated! I melted right into your story with good memories of my own.
03/02/07
Very sweet story, and I liked the ending a lot! There were a few punctuation errors, though, and in your opening paragraph, it would have been easier to read if you had separated the words of the two speakers. I did enjoy the theme of life beginning and life ending, and I was very impressed with Grandma Dorothy's character! Good job! :)
03/02/07
Nice job & great ending!
03/03/07
I really enjoyed this heartwarming story. I would have liked to see a few of Grandma Dorothy's sayings quoted. Good job.
03/04/07
A very sweet story and tribute to your grandmother. I loved the ending. Great job.
03/08/07
Connie,

I love that your daughter was born with fiery red hair, as predicted by Grandma Norris.

In Jesus' Name,

Patricia