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04/18/05
Wow, this is very powerful. You have effectively described a life tortured with grief and self-condemnation. So sad that she would not accept that God has forgiven her in Jesus.
04/18/05
If she could only realize, her child is alright and flourishing in the Presence of their Heavenly Father. That forgiveness is for here and now, and one day all will be forgotten and made new. Peace to the ones who suffer so, over this decision that God has already forgiven. Pat
04/18/05
I was so caught up in the instensity of the piece I forgot to comment -- Well done and good job. Pat
You write with alot of power. Good job.
04/21/05
Very moving. Your title is clever, too. Well done.
04/21/05
The intensity of the grieving ache carries all the way through.
04/23/05
Excellent writing and vivid imagery.