The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful! I love "a dinner for two-plus thirteen more" I love the title, Ruby Day.
04/18/05
I enjoyed your poem. It has a very light and happy feeling. Great title too. Thanks for sharing it.
04/21/05
Loved this! It really drew pictures on my mind and the flow was just beautiful. Felt like a ballroom dance :)
04/26/05
Joyce, this was lovely - and it's always a delight to see poetry in the Challenge. Unfortunately, you may have missed the guidelines about word count. The minimum is 150 words, and your poem came in at just 102. Don't be discouraged though. Your poem was delightful and I hope you'll enter the Challenge again. Just keep the word counts in mind - 150 minimum and 750 maximum. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)