The Official Writing Challenge
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You made me thirsty. Great comparison to the importance of water and God's Word.
(Sorry, hit the button too soon!) A good piece to show the body's need for water and the soul's need for the Word of God. Some sentences were a little choppy to me, especially in the first paragraph, but the overall writing was good.
The message was good but I couldn't see the connection with sport or fitness - read through a couple of times, but missed it - unless it related to the work on the farm?