The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/07
Can I ever relate to this! You do a good with a great message. Keep writitng.
02/23/07
A good chunk of reality here. Good job!
02/23/07
I love this!
I enjoyed your story very much. It held my interest right from start to finish.
I liked the usage of your words. Keep on writing.
What a wonderful encouraging article. It fits so many of our lives. I especially liked the line "I'm going to keep on falling back into that lazy river if I don't figure out how to swim." Such a good way to express our helplessness in situations like this.
02/26/07
I liked your humour in this piece, how you so easily showed your situation, and also the lessons you learned at the end. You are right that we can't do it on our strength! Good work!