The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/05
What a great testimony to God's hand at work! Your first paragraph is great and it effectively and concisely put me in the scene. The last line made me chuckle. Very nice job.
Great job of it. My favorite line: What? A lady "prim and proper (and well adjusted no doubt) wants to visit me?" You don't have to be admitted to a psych ward to feel that way, I know I have plenty of times.
04/21/05
Isn't God great! You brought to light beautifully the way He blessed you with that 'prim and proper' friend. The tone of your article was not too heavy and not too light - just right. Well done.