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04/18/05
The descriptions you have used to descibe your body's unwillingness to cooperate are very good. Your story reminds me of the shepherd who so willingly leaves all the other sheep to retrieve just one, and carry it back in his loving arms. His reach is great, even to the one who doesn't dare to budge. Thanks for your story.
This was a beautiful account of the inner struggle a heart has when making a decision to live for Christ. You counted the cost. I especially like the specific memories that are etched in your mind forever, especially the "carpet at your feet". This says so much about where your shy heart was at that moment. Nicely done.
04/23/05
This was very well described, especially for a childhood memory. It drew me right in.