The Official Writing Challenge
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Not everyone likes this style of humor - but I DO! Good job.
as one who suffers from a phobia of flying objects (one smack of a softball to my forehead did it) I appreciated this, and its humor :) good job!
I was one who was often picked first, and have in your piece discovered why I can't get published! lol
Rejection letters hurt like volleyballs. I like your humor.
I was always picked second to last, right before my best friend, so we were never on the same team. I also enjoyed your humor. Great job.
I, too, could identify with much of this! It made me smile & I liked the casual (like talking to a friend) voice.
I liked your personal voice too. Good writing and good story!
I really enjoyed the humor in this. Good writing. (Watch your then and than. The third last paragraph has this error in it.) It doesn't take from the story however. Very good article here.
I love reading your stories! :-) The ones who were picked first aren't able to do many of the things you can!! :-)