The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/07
What an awesome story! Great job keeping the reader's attention and a wonderful perspective on a "different type of champion".
02/22/07
Nice. I was a bit confused because it starts with the horse, but the end is more about the girl. What an inspirational & hopeful story!
Wonderful story. So inspirational. One thing bothered me. The sentence which read: "His mother died during birth." This needs to be clarified. She had to die "giving" birth or "during his birth". It reads to me like she died while being born which is imposible since she is his mother. But this is a minor issue and can be easily remedied. Still a wonderful story.
Great title and great story. I was only unsure of the ending. Did she win the trophy at the annual show? Or did it come in the mail sometime later? A really nice job!