The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/07
I love your take on the topic. Great "announcement" and discription of the requirements. There were a few misplaced commas, but overall a great read. Great analogy of the coach.
02/23/07
Very apt analogy, and cleverly written.

It really starts to roll about a thrid of the way down, with the "good evening" bit. You might consider starting it there.

This is a painless, non-preachifying way to get across some important points. Well done.
02/24/07
I enjoyed that way this was put together too. Very clever idea. Well done.
Great, clever, and enjoyable read. I loved God as the head Coach. Winner in my book. Nice Job.