The Official Writing Challenge
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02/17/07
This poem is very deep and thought provoking. You have done a splendid job with this entry. "The gods are man's creation" and the beggar asks "Is there a god of mercy...? We do create our own gods and forget that there is a merciful God.
Thought-provoking, well-crafted poem.
02/21/07
Excellent poem! I really liked the story and the movement. Very thought-provoking, especially when the god-smith admits that the gods are man's creations. I particularly liked the blindman's return at the end.
02/27/07
Very deep and well written!