The Official Writing Challenge
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I was sitting on the couch in the story. A sweet description of a mother's love and a reminder that all are created by God. We are all perfect and precious in His sight. This is a winner in my opinion.
02/15/07
This was marvelous. The ending caught me off guard and made the story much, much sweeter. Very moving - well done.
I loved the description of Janny finishing her doll in the first paragraph. I could just picture her doing all those things, and it brought her to life for me.
This is a marvelous story--the descriptions just right, good narrative beginning to end, a surprise ending, and containing an excellent meaning.
02/18/07
This one touched me very deeply.
02/18/07
absolutely beautiful. wonderful description and emotion. lovely messege we all need to remember. we are the Craftsman's masterpieces!
02/20/07
Great story! I loved the emotional ending! I also loved the message of God's love for us!
You did a beautiful job of crafting such truth into your story. Congratulations!