The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the interaction with the little girl and her grampie. I would have liked to see more. I liked the descriptive words used to describe Lexie and Fred. I could vividly see them. Nice job.
02/15/07
My favorite phrase was "hair the color of the sawdust, like wheat painted with sunshine". Your use of description is excellent.

02/16/07
Just beautiful description! You painted a lovely picture with your words!
Loved the scene where little Lexie came skipping into the shop. You could tell by her actions that she was confident that grampa would receive this attention gladly.
I like this. Grandpa must think Lexie is very special. The ending is very sweet.