The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked your story and where it was headed. The concept and originality was good. I only wish it had a little more explanation about the characters predicament.
02/15/07
I agree. It kept me all the way through, but would have liked a little more explanation. Good story!
02/15/07
I also found the article compelling. As other's have commented though, it left me a bit confused. There was a lot of symbolism here that probably needed more explanation - hard to do in a short article. You write well though.
This was a compelling, well written piece. There are a few questions left unanswered, but altogether it's great stuff.
02/16/07
I loved your title, and your piece was very intriguing. I didn't understand it all, though, and wish there was more explanation. You write very descriptively, and I would like to read more of your work.
02/20/07
I liked the beginning of your story; you had me very curious, and I could really sense the character's struggle between her old traditions and her new beliefs. The ending confused me, however. Perhaps without the word limit you could expand on this.