The Official Writing Challenge
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A very sad story. It seemed to me that the character needed support and the one place she should be given it...was a disappointment.
02/13/07
This is a hard one but you told it well. Good job.
02/13/07
Their hands were loose – almost lifeless. This is a perfect description. A person's heart is conveyed through their hand shake. This story is even sadder because parts of the church are guilty of this kind of behaviour.

02/15/07
Sad story. Couldn't really understand what the reason for the coolness, but this conduct also tells a sad story. Written well, and has a believable title. God Bless.